A serious health issue is rising in many nations is childhood obesity. This essay will look at some primary reasons that cause obesity in children and offer some solutions to the problem.
There are a number of causes for children obesity. Perhaps, the main reason is their unhealthy eating habits. Children, nowadays, are more likely to consume more junk food and candies instead of green vegetables. Soft drink is favored by teenagers as well. In fact, these kinds of food and drink contain high levels of sugar, which is the direct cause of obesity. Moreover, junk food and soft drinks lack essential nutrition for healthy development in children such as minerals or vitamins. Another reason is the sedentary lifestyle of children. They love spending time inside their house watching TV or playing video games rather than joining in outdoor activities. As a sequence, they are becoming increasingly obese.
With that in mind, there are several solutions for improving the situation of obesity in children. Firstly, what food children consume should be controlled by their parents to make sure that they eat an enough amount of healthy food, which provides them with essential nutrition to grow up healthily. Secondly, children should be educated about the detrimental effects of the food and drink which contain high levels of sugar in order to raise their awareness and let them voluntarily consume less of those food and drinks. Finally, parents should limit the time children spend on sedentary activities, instead, incentive them to participate in outdoor sports such as soccer, swimming or cycling.
In conclusion, bad eating habits and sedentary lifestyle might be the main factors that cause obesity in children. However, there are various solutions such as controlling the food the children consume, or educating them about the bad effects of junk food, or encouraging them to join in outdoor activities that parents can implement to tackle childhood obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
Suggestion: this food; those foods
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58623115206 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534810126582 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6712737645 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165838110989 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524994156559 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608856733297 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128248737841 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949584556156 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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