The given pictures depict the current organization of a university's sports centre and the look it will assume after being revamped and remodelled.
Overall, despite apparently significant changes, the sports centre retains the basic elements of gym, changing room and reception, with the addition of a cafe, leisure pool, dance studios and sports hall.
Currently, there is a 25 m pool in the centre, with the changing room situated centre left and seating to the right. Likewise, reception is on the south side and protrudes from the block housing the 25 m pool. Similarly, there are two outdoor courts, one to the east and the other to the west of the sports' centre. While the outdoor courts are in separate buildings, 25 m pool, changing room, reception, seating and the gym are all in the same building.
University sports' centre will be altered considerably with the execution of proposed development plans. All the facilities of the sports' centre will be housed in the same roof. Where one of the outdoor court stands, there will be a leisure pool. The nucleus of the sports centre will remain intact with the enlargement and extension of gym to the east and the addition of sports hall adjacent to seating. Moreover, two dance studios will be built on the eastern edges while changing rooms will be constructed in the south east and south west corner with cafe and sports' shop nearby respectively.
- The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after It was refurbished The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods 67
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 56
- The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Some people think that children should start school at a very early age but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older Discuss both view and give your opinion 56
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children To what exatent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, likewise, look, moreover, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58564204912 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483193277311 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9531745813 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159539710185 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760997370037 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580983448241 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112871703569 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684164024452 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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