The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.
This is pie chart show illustration information of growth on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050 with three categories of ages about 0 - 14 years, 15 - 59 years and 60+ years.
From the pie chart of Yemen, There is two pie charts were give information of development of population on different categories ages, the first pie chart was forward percentage in 2000 year 46.3% of category 15 – 59 years, 3.6 % by category 60+ years and 50.1% of percentage 0 -14 years, from the second pie chart was happen increase of percentage of population in 2050 year, 57.3% for category 15 – 59 years, 5.7% by category 60+ years but decrease for category 0 -14 years namely 37.0%.
Italy give information about increase population from 2000 until 2050 there are show two pie charts, the first pie chart in 2000 year was percentage 24.1% for category 60+ years, 14.3% by category 0 -14 years and 61.6% of category age 15 -59 years, and become decrease of amount population based on different categories of ages in the second pie chart in 2050 year that is 11.5% in category 0 - 14 years, 46,2% in category 15 - 59% years but increase of total population of 60+ years category that is 42.3%.
Overall, from Yemen was occur of growth population from 2000 to 2050 year from 46.3% - 57.3% in category 15 – 59 years, and 3.6% - 5.7% in category 60+ years, from Italy only category of 60+ years experience raise from 24.1% - 42.3%.
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050. 50
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technologyIn what ways has technology effected the types of relationship people make?Has this become a positive or negative development? 60
- In some countries the average weight of people increasing and their levels of health and fitness decreasing?What do you think are causes of this problems and what measuring could be taken to solve them? 40
This is pie chart show illustration information
The pie chart shows the illustration information
There is two pie charts were give information
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
was happen increase of percentage of population
was happened to increase the percentage of population
Italy give information
Italy gives information
from Yemen was occur of growth population
from Yemen, it was occurring of growth population
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 10
No. of Words: 255 200
No. of Characters: 1125 1000
No. of Different Words: 80 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.412 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.492 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 51 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 31.616 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.638 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.83 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.314 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4