In this set of materials, the reading part discusses wood companies which conserving resources and recycling materials and receive a certification which can attract customers by this certification, around the world many companies are interested in this certification but in the United States the companies are not enthusiast to do this, and the author provides three reasons of support. And the listening section refutes the information presented in the article and argues that despite the reasons mentioned in the text the American wood companies are also seeking this certification.
First, the passage posits that American consumers do not believe in advertisements because many mediocre products are labeled as "improved". However the talk makes the point that the American people do not treat same all advertisements, and they know that an advertisement is made by own company or and independent organization. Therefore, they believe to an independent organization's advertisement and certification.
Second, the text asserts that the wood of the certified companies will be expensive because their business should examined by an agency, hence it makes cost for the wood company, consequently the companies should sell their products with higher price and the American people prefer to buy inexpensive products. On the contrary, the speaker believes that it is true that Americans care about price, but it happens only when to companies have competition on price. But a small amount of money is not very important for people, and also the American people know the value of the preserving and protecting the nature.
Third, according to the article, American companies do not import their products to the other countries, therefore they do not pursuing the certification. The American costumers are satisfied with the merchandise. The professor disagrees with this part, and postulates that the if the American companies want to compete with other companies they have to get the certification, if domestic companies do not have this certification the other foreign companies which have the certification can capture their market.
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discusses wood companies which conserving resources and recycling materials and receive a certification which can attract customers by this certification
discusses wood companies which are conserving resources and recycling materials and receive a certification which can attract customers by this certification
Sentence: However the talk makes the point that the American people do not treat same all advertisements, and they know that an advertisement is made by own company or and independent organization.
Description: The tag a conjunction, coordinating is not usually followed by and
Suggestion: Refer to or and and
Sentence: Second, the text asserts that the wood of the certified companies will be expensive because their business should examined by an agency, hence it makes cost for the wood company, consequently the companies should sell their products with higher price and the American people prefer to buy inexpensive products.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to should and examined
Sentence: The professor disagrees with this part, and postulates that the if the American companies want to compete with other companies they have to get the certification, if domestic companies do not have this certification the other foreign companies which have the certification can capture their market.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a conjunction, subordinating
Suggestion: Refer to the and if
therefore they do not pursuing the certification
therefore they do not pursue the certification
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Food Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 329 250
No. of Characters: 1772 1200
No. of Different Words: 158 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.259 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.386 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.02 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.126 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.909 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.398 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.645 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4