some people are reducing their walks, however some experts say that walking is best exercise to maintain health . why do people walk less, what might encourage people to walk long distance.
walking is considered as one of the best exercise to eradicate the health problems and to be physically fit. some health experts completely support the statement. However, presently, some people are reducing their walks due to certain reasons. Here i would like to account for causes and remedies to overcome this problem.
As there are manifold points to explain the causes. first and foremost , nowadays people do not have time to go for a walk because of their busy lifestyle . for example, one who has to get ready in early morning to go to office or to their work place therefor, they do not have sufficient time to go for a walk. As a result people are reducing their walks .
further emphasizing on my point, people do not have specific place for walking . As it is difficult for them to walk on busy roads due to traffic moreover, no parks are available in cities. As a result, people are decreasing their walks. Furthermore, the pollution is also one of the main concern for this problem. people believe that walking in polluted area can result to serious health problems. Consequently people are disliking to have a walk.
There are numerous ways for solution of this problem .primarily , Government should step out to set up parks and specific places for people to walk and exercise as well. Apart from it, government should make people aware about their health by the help of television programs and seminars. Thereafter government should convince public to plant more and more trees to control the level of carbon dioxide in the air which is one of the harmful gas for human being and animals.
To recapitulate, everyone should make efforts to build ''a healthy nation''. Even according to my perception, I believe that everyone should do proper exercise including walking to be physically fit and to get rid of health problems.
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