Some children do not complete their schooling, there might be various factors behind this situation. In my opinion, some of them do not get enough support from their families others might be facing financial problems. This may be solved by the help of some guidance to both parents and students.
Schooling is an important part of one's life, It is much needed in building a strong foundation. Children can learn basic things in life by attending school. Not only education centers teach the children about various subjects but also they help children learn other important aspects of life such as friendship, respecting elders, Sharing and caring. These days many students are leaving schools unfinished. there might be financial problems behind these tough decisions. Not all families have same financial background, Some cannot afford good schooling for their children. Other important factor causing for earlier withdraws from schools might be because of the family issues, students may not receive a positive support from their parents due to which children might face problems with their studies and no one is there to support them or answer there questions that they might want to ask. Nowadays there is a huge trend of the dropouts, we read everywhere that the world is being lead by those who had decided to dropout of the education institution. This may be affecting how children see there way of getting successful in life.
There are various solutions to the addressed problem. For the families facing financial difficulties there shall be an easy and affordable load schemes from the government as well the leading financial institutions. If the parents are facing certain family emergencies or difficulties there should be consultancies to work that out for them. If family matters are what keeping the children from attending the school then they should be solved without any doubt as it is affecting the young minds. Children should also be taught the importance of schooling, Dropping out of college for following some dream and achieving it is different and quite honestly brave but not going to school because your mentors were dropouts as well is not good.
In the conclusion I believe It is up to the adults and every one around the children to convey theme how important schools are. These educational institutions are there to help them grow effectively and make the right choices along the way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s. Schooling is an important part of ones life, It is much needed in building a s...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...tudents are leaving schools unfinished. there might be financial problems behind thes...
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Line 8, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d make the right choices along the way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, may, so, then, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11838790932 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6195625834 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531486146096 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.623762741 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.947368421 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239825036876 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083156905382 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053336767162 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138492618423 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532501745027 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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