The city of Winston has two large department stores: Namen and Roscoe. Namen is known for its high-end designer fashions, while Roscoe is known for more affordable fashion options. Both Namen and Roscoe are each considering opening another store in the growing suburb of Salem, where the population has grown over 50% in the last three years and where the median income is $75,000. Namen’s executives argue that as population and median income increase, people are willing to spend more money on clothing. However, Roscoe’s executives believe that the suburbs are more family oriented, and therefore their store will be more profitable than their competitor Namen.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
In a new era, fashion has evolved tremendously for people of all places round the globe. Recently, fashion has become a huge statement and a big part of people's lives. There are different outfits for different ocassions, ranging from chic work wear to colourful beach wear.
The statement takes a contrasting view of two department stores with one being high-end and sophisticated, while the other being affordable and family oriented. The executives plan on expanding in the evolving suburb of Salem with an increased median income. The income of an shop can be directly proportional to the people and place where it is situated. The suburbs of Salem has seen a rise in population, hence a rise in the demand.
The range of questions to decide which shop would have more business would depend on the existing fashion trends and western influence in Salem. Nowadays, even small regions are having access to social media and the internet. People tend to look at actors and catch up with the latest fashion trends to feel good about themselves. People are becoming less frugal to spend openly on buying new clothes. Body positivity also plays a pivotal role in shaping the fashion sense of people. Since people in the surburbs too are becoming more educated and modern, they are willing to spend on themselves and making fashion a colossal part.
To answer these recommendations, the population of Salem will likely go to Namen's store. The reason for this being the increased educated population with a higher income having affinity to catch up with the latest trends in fashion. Suburbs still being family oriented will prefer a shop that would keep them up to date with the latest trends in fashion, even if that means spending extra money. Since the last three years, the rise in the median salary makes this situation more probable.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 310 350
No. of Characters: 1497 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.196 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.829 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.442 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.893 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.294 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.514 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Salem with an increased median income. The income of an shop can be directly propo...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... increased median income. The income of an shop can be directly proportional to th...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... people and place where it is situated. The suburbs of Salem has seen a rise in pop...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ulation, hence a rise in the demand. The range of questions to decide which shop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 310.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96129032258 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53075977865 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3402846389 57.8364921388 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4705882353 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 5.70786347227 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150050173648 0.218282227539 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451745093869 0.0743258471296 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401119491191 0.0701772020484 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880260314367 0.128457276422 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115706437804 0.0628817314937 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.3799401198 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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