The best way for the society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry or other fields is by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
These days society is filled with competition everywhere, making it difficult to those who want to achieve their dreams by inducing stress filled environment through competition from others.Therefore,By making the society as an uncompetitive world and a cooperative one,the society's young people could concentrate on their long-term goals efficiently with the support of others in the society.
Firstly, an uncompetitive world gives you no stress since it manages to provide every individual competition less society in their preparation for the long term goals. The young people in such societies have a clear idea about what are they pursuing and what are they opting from it. If an individual in such societies aspires to become an industrialist , then he could make it all the way to pursue his dreams with the cooperation of others where there is no competition and stress filled environment. Such dreams can be pursued with long term discipline and determination towards his achievement of his dream to be an industrialist.
In such environment , there will be no competition between individuals but there exists an continuous fight between an individuals determination and his zeal to achieve his dream. Consider another individual who aspires to become a sportsperson, without competition from the society, he and his society supporting him must constantly need to motivate him to not to lack in determination to achieve his dream to be a legend of his sport. And if he doesn't give up , he is definitely to be achieving what he wants to be with the support of the society's cooperation.
Although, the there will be no stressful situation to an individual from the society , it is very likely for an individual to deviate from his way to achieve his goals and end up failing. In such situation, motivation is mostly required to keep going to achieve what an individual dreamt of.It is well described by the quote,"Determination is what you require to start something and motivation is what you need to keep going".
Finally , it can be concluded that with a competition less and a very cooperative society an individual can achieve what he dreams for .Despite of few flaws, I totally agree that the young people in society must be prepared for their field of interests by instilling a sense of cooperation but not competition.
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flaws:
1. The essay is not exactly right on the topic. it is not only for 'individual' but for 'leadership'.
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