Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although some people argue in feature based on the population's growth there will be an increment in the quantity of automobiles, I firmly opposes the idea that the number of cars in use will have been amplified by twenty years later. List of the factors persuades me to put forward this attitude toward this issue, the following paragraph illustrate the main three outstanding reasons.
One of the significant reasons, which convinces me to put forward this viewpoint, is the worldwide usage of the internet and technology which ease the life and eliminate the extra transportation. Nowadays, each individual has the ability to control any task from remote distance. There is no any restriction or barrier to obstacle your progression, and the internet and technology are two vital factors, which pave the path for us. For instance, nowadays at the medical operation the surgeon has this ability to operate a patient at other hospital which located kilometres far away from the doctor without transportation and just by using of the internet which presents the patient’s current stands and the technology which render the function instead of the doctor. In this case, there is no doubt in the feature the improvement of these elements will be more sufficient than todays and most tasks will take place with less transportation.
Another critical reason is the environmental pollution. One of the most concerning subsequent of the current societies is the environmental pollution which can be forked to air pollution, water contamination, ecosystem corruption, and etc. If in this paragraph we just focus on the air pollution; it is lucidly obvious one of the major factors of this issue is the toxic gases which emit from the vehicle’s exhaust pipe. Based on the statistic from the International Union for the Conservation of Nature (ICUN) approximately the 65% of the air pollution caused by the CO2 and 70% factors of this disaster is the vehicle. Thus, based on this facts there are special activity to change human habit and form new transportation culture which concise the automobile quantities.
Finally, some people state that based on the todays' population thrive and current's automobile usage there will be huge traffic jam in twenty years; however, they underestimate the capacities of the route. If the scheme of the making new transportation's habit does not progress as mentioned above; it is cogent they will be mass of the car usage; however, the paths or routes cannot be responsible to this thrive; and in this scenario just cars will be stand adjacent together without any moving forward or backward. Consequently, the cars miss its transportation defines.
All in all, it estimates based on the population's growth, there will be a massive need to cars in twenty years; however, based on the technological improvements, environmental issues, and the capability of route, there will not any significant amplified at car usages.
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the number of cars in use will have been amplified
the number of cars in use will be amplified
List of the factors persuades me
List of the factors persuade me
the following paragraph illustrate the main three outstanding reasons.
the following paragraphs illustrate the main three outstanding reasons.
it estimates based on the population's growth
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there will not any significant amplified at car usages.
there will be no any significant rise at car usages.
Sentence: For instance, nowadays at the medical operation the surgeon has this ability to operate a patient at other hospital which located kilometres far away from the doctor without transportation and just by using of the internet which presents the patient's current stands and the technology which render the function instead of the doctor.
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And the third paragraph is not related to the topic.
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