People say that having a pistol in a society by the police may cause violence. I disagree with this statement, as it is necessary to create fear in people mind to follow law and order. Furthermore, it is important for police to feel confident while dealing with criminals.
Police have to provide security to government officials, ministers, and stars.They need some sort of weapon to help them to do it.Sometimes police have to face movement against government. In that case, gun is required to contain people from getting violent. Police need some kind of power to sustain system. And the gun plays a vital role in it. For instance, there are regular protest all over world, few example of such protest are when Indian government made new laws regarding, farmer, and citizen laws.
Police has a higher responsibility to maintain law and order in the city. If they don'thave the guns, it would be difficult to produce fear in people mind of the law and police. .Other than that, police should feel confident about their power. They have to deal with all sorts of criminals in a city. Without gun, confidence is impossible to achieve. Without gun, they won’t be confident. For example, in order to stop fight between groups, a pistol is needed.
In conclusion, by possession of pistol a police officer, not only develop and maintain order, but also feel capable in handling any kinds of situation. The gun ensure safety of people in the society, also it ensure safety of police officer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ernment officials, ministers, and stars.They need some sort of weapon to help them t...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sometimes
...me sort of weapon to help them to do it.Sometimes police have to face movement against go...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'few examples'.
Suggestion: few examples
...ere are regular protest all over world, few example of such protest are when Indian governm...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r in people mind of the law and police. .Other than that, police should feel conf...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Other
... in people mind of the law and police. .Other than that, police should feel confident...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'ensures'.
Suggestion: ensures
...andling any kinds of situation. The gun ensure safety of people in the society, also i...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ensures'?
Suggestion: ensures
...afety of people in the society, also it ensure safety of police officer.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56476701197 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2009806416 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2142857143 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272215337885 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838970032367 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047844907785 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17665106215 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525371232271 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ernment officials, ministers, and stars.They need some sort of weapon to help them t...
^^^^
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sometimes
...me sort of weapon to help them to do it.Sometimes police have to face movement against go...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'few examples'.
Suggestion: few examples
...ere are regular protest all over world, few example of such protest are when Indian governm...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r in people mind of the law and police. .Other than that, police should feel conf...
^
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Other
... in people mind of the law and police. .Other than that, police should feel confident...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'ensures'.
Suggestion: ensures
...andling any kinds of situation. The gun ensure safety of people in the society, also i...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ensures'?
Suggestion: ensures
...afety of people in the society, also it ensure safety of police officer.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56476701197 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2009806416 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2142857143 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272215337885 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838970032367 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047844907785 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17665106215 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525371232271 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.