Nowadays, people tend to spend less time at home than they used to. What are the causes for this change and what are the effects on society and individuals?
Spending less time at home is an issue that arouses greater and greater concern today. Society and individuals are affected positively when people have spent more time in public places. It makes people connect more, changes their lifestyle and society develops rapidly. There are multiple causes for this, including employment problems, people’s awareness of health, and relaxation.
First, the cost of living always is the biggest reason for people to go out. If someone stays at home all day long, they will have difficulty with money because they have to pay more for many bills like electricity, eating, education, and so on. People have to go outside for finding a job to earn money and maintain a stable standard of living. Moreover, the cost of living is higher than in the past so people choose to do extra work to get more money. Instead of doing work in 8 hours, people who want to do extra work have to do work in 10 to 12 hours. That is the reason why the time they stay at home is reduced.
Second, health is being paid attention to by everyone, especially after Covid-19. When people just stay at home, it doesn’t have too much physical activity which leads to people getting fat quickly so many people choose to go out outside to lose weight. It is easy to give up when they stay at home because they are easily attracted by food, TV, social media, and so on. Going outsides, walking or running, and enjoying the atmosphere at the place they live is a good way to lose weight and reduce stress. Moreover, many exercise groups appear day by day, it also attracts people to put their phones down and give them the motivation to do exercise. Because of that, people’s health is always maintained and the time they go outside also increased.
Last, people stay at home less than they used to because they go outsides to relax. Nowadays, many types of entertainment appear like karaoke, beer club, water park, board game, onsen…and it is more attractive than staying at home. After working hard, people always want to reduce stress, forget all deadlines and enjoy days off but they can not spend all long sleeping and staying at home, it is so boring. Hanging out with friends or family, and trying new types of entertainment will make people’s day amazing. Besides that, relaxing outsides take a lot of time. People can not shopping in 30 minutes, it always takes 3 to 4 hours and others activities are also like that.
In brief, due to the rapid development of society and the high load of work, many people spend a lot of time outside to achieve a better living standard. Besides that, the appearance of various types of entertainment also an effect cause to people stay at home less than they used to, and this phenomenon affects both society and personal life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the time they stay at home is reduced. Second, health is being paid attention t...
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Line 3, column 753, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he time they go outside also increased. Last, people stay at home less than they...
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Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...ides take a lot of time. People can not shopping in 30 minutes, it always takes 3 to 4 h...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... others activities are also like that. In brief, due to the rapid development o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69795918367 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40622197783 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9897696067 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54166666667 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3248409925 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103301025866 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741696792539 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220540824181 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709567276304 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the time they stay at home is reduced. Second, health is being paid attention t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 753, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he time they go outside also increased. Last, people stay at home less than they...
^^^
Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...ides take a lot of time. People can not shopping in 30 minutes, it always takes 3 to 4 h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... others activities are also like that. In brief, due to the rapid development o...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69795918367 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40622197783 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9897696067 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54166666667 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3248409925 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103301025866 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741696792539 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220540824181 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709567276304 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.