Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the generation of the fast development of technology, children have a variety of ways to gain information, such as tv or computer games. some people have been argued it is better for children to read books rather than watching tv or playing computer games. In my opinion, I agree with the idea that children will benefit more from reading stories in books.
There are a lot of advantages for children to read books. First, stories in books can inspire children’s imagination, creativity, and critical thinking. From reading different stories, children can image the scenes from words and think...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nhance children's language skills. kids can learn vocabulary, collocation, and ...
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...apos;s concentration and comprehension. it will help children to learn more effici...
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...hildren can be addicted to them easily. children would rather spend their time playing v...
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...ill at the early stage of development. In conclusion, it is clear that reading ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53608247423 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98492332299 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.407132274 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368887345107 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121630553561 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100452192195 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246844018994 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084638053769 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.