Most students choose to work part time during their university studies. Do you think it’s good or bad idea? Give your opinion and support with an explanation and examples.
No one can argue that education is a key to have a better life. University students have to dedicate themselves in their studies in order to achieve a degree. Moreover, some students also want to work as a part-time employee during their university life. Some people thing that it could affect their education performances, whereas I think that it is a good idea to work along with study. The positive developments of working part time will be discussed carefully.
To begin with, the first benefit of doing a part-time job in university life is financial stability. Having their own income, it a...
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