In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
Nowadays, a number of people preferable go shopping in large outskirt malls rather than at tiny marts inside the town. Likewise, a huge automobile usage is a significant increase, while many people face the inconvenience of transportation goes shopping at the big stores. In this essay, I would like to demonstrate between benefits and drawbacks with my overall opinion.
From a major perspective, there have two main advantages of purchasing things at huge malls outside the cities willing to organized well for time management and cost-saving. First, good time controls are perhaps the main major for humankind come to do purchasing with a wide range of various items in just one space, such as groceries, foods, meat, daily using equipment, electronic stuff, and other goods, all are available in stock. Secondly, in general, numerous folks are really interesting and more enjoyable buying a lot of items during the sales season. Mostly, the big malls will offer special discounts and promotions for likely to luxury items, cosmetics, beauty skincare, and clothes.
In contrast, there are also various disadvantages. The most common concern the tiny malls inside the town will face is the risk of failure in trade and a lot of stores will be close forever. Furthermore, the increase in automobile usage has a prediction to be the worst effect on the environment, outskirts areas are going impacted by air pollution from the smoke of many cars have been used. In addition, the consequence of driving cars for a far distance just to purchase some of the items at large out of town stores perhaps bring a big impact to the traffic conjunction.
To conclude, despite a number of advantages to getting a long drive out of the town for shopping at huge malls, moreover, some of the various disadvantages which impact the business development inside the tiny town, the rapid growth of traffic conjunction and worst effect to our environment by air pollution from overuse of automobile. The way I see it, the drawbacks of this issue outweigh its benefits.
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- In some countries small town centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out of town stores As a result people without cars have limited access to out of town stores and it may result in an increase in the use of cars Do y 84
- In some countries small town center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out of town stores As a result people without cars have limited access to out of town stores and it may result in an increase in the use of cars Do y 84
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in contrast, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07647058824 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84491898195 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2600579923 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211686228926 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637329013654 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772635360826 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129068824083 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738830755562 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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