The issue of advertising has always been controversial; while some argue that it's negatives are more than positives, others think that the advertising is useful for individuals and businesses. Although it is clear why some hate advertising, I believe that it has good affects on society.
According to them, there is the advertisement virtually everywhere, such as, in city roads, on smartphones and TVs. People, therefore, are annoyed by facing with them a lot in their life, especially while watching something on the smartphones and TVs. For example, a person is watching a movie on TV and in the essential part of it, there is an advertisement, because of this, he/she will be angry. Even though some may claim that the advertisements aren't so annoying, but they are when always in the same.
However, a good trade is theway of fast developing, for this, some businesses make many advertisements and try to install them many places, where far away from their companies or on the internet, which can spread over the world. In addition to this, it can create more comfort to people who don't awere of the location of a company because there is definitely contact number of the company in the advertisement and they can keep in touch with a manager of the company and take some information about it via the call numbers. Certainly, some may see no benefit from the advertisement in selling, it may not seem that the sale is occured owing to the advertising.
Another argument is that time efficiency. Almost everyone tries to spend their time effectively and they can do it by delivering their necessities to their destination. Should the individuals see something online and want to buy it, they shouldn't go to a place, where it has. Since people do online shopping, it is received in some period without any labour of them. Obviously, some may say that going to shops to buy something doesn't take much time, there are this kind of people, who don't have free time to do it in the society.
In conclusion, despite the disadvantages of the advertising, I am of the opinion that it has more advantages for both individuals and businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83378746594 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92132404752 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531335149864 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5006956635 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.461538462 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233816634562 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788297107598 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655381426538 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134240668644 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05545186778 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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