Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The author claims that since the television station has devoted much time on national news rather than weather and local news which has cause viewers to complain on this matter. There is no enough evidence to support this claim however it made on contradicting examples and unproven assumption.
Firstly, complaints from viewers with the station coverage of weather and local new is a contradicting example. The author claims that less time has been devoted to weather and local news so then there is no coverage on that aspect and if so then there wouldn't any cause of complain on that.
Also, the claim that local businesses terminating their contract because of people do not view or watch late night news is an unproven assumption. however, it could be that local businesses had gotten the market already so there would not any need for an advertising for the time been. It could be local business do not see the relevance of the advertisement during late nights because they may feel people might asleep at time of the night.
Furthermore, devoting to weather and local news to its formal level does not guarantee that viewers will start watching late night new program and also does not also guarantee that local business will still use the late night program for their advertisement.
In conclusion, there is no enough evidence to support the claim that however, the claim is based on a contradicting examples and unproven assumption.
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Comments
e-rater score report
flaws:
No. of Words: 244 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 244 350
No. of Characters: 1180 1500
No. of Different Words: 115 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.952 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.836 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.535 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 77 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.559 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.469 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.803 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...no enough evidence to support this claim however it made on contradicting example...
^^
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at less time has been devoted to weather and local news so then there is no cover...
^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...age on that aspect and if so then there wouldnt any cause of complain on that. Also...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...e night news is an unproven assumption. however, it could be that local businesses had ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 441.139720559 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98353909465 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60922225571 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 204.123752495 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477366255144 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 705.55239521 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3694585264 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.555555556 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.70786347227 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284914436404 0.218282227539 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122009315576 0.0743258471296 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830282926845 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15295921379 0.128457276422 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795171206373 0.0628817314937 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 98.500998004 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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