Since time immemorial, humans have verified their favoritism to positive actions in numerous ways. However, redefining the notion of positive and negative actions in the context of teaching is abstruse and highly debatable. Taken on the extreme, some would argue that the ideal way in teaching is the amplification of positive actions while disregarding the negative ones. Others, however, would ignore the positive actions and focus only on the negative ones. After carefully evaluating the following facts, it becomes clear that teaching is more productive not only when positive actions are reward...
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Sentence: To begin with, based on scientific studies, the development of kids' psychology is greately affected by the teaching methods and the positive or negative feedback on their actions.
Error: greately Suggestion: greatly
Sentence: On the other side of the opinion camp, many teachers and psychologists have exhibited their opposition that praising the positive actions of students, in the context of teaching, can seriously spoil their personality, turning them into hyperopic arrogants.
Error: arrogants Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: hyperopic Suggestion: hyperbolic ?
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