Describe the hotel you were staying

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Describe the hotel you were staying

My recent visit to India was an excellent one. I stayed at the ABC Hotel. Thu was a wonderful hotel to stay in India. ABC hotel in Mumbai, India. This is a five-star hotel and comes with all the modern amenities. There are over 200 single and double rooms with private bathrooms and 50 luxurious suites. Rooms are both comfortable and elegant with full baths, sturdy and rustic wooden furniture. In addition, suites include an extra sitting room. The hotel has spacious parking where visitors could park their vehicle easy. Moreover, the entire hotel building has wireless high-speed Internet and it's free. So, the hotel always crowded with visitors and most of them are tourists from a different country. I really like it because the environment is warm and it offers a good service. There are lots of staff available round day and night. The hotel staffs are amiable, professional and they welcomed the clients with the wariness of their heart. They always smiled when they treat the guests. Besides, the food of the hotel's restaurant was delicious. I had a chance to taste the traditional meals of the country at ABC hotel. I was pleased with all the dishes there. One of the important things about the hotel is the cost. It’s cheaper than the neighborhood hotels special room rates. In short, ABC hotel is an amazing hotel and it’s a good choice for accommodating for visitors to India. It's the best hotel that I stayed in. If I have a chance comeback India, I will enjoy ABC hotel one more times.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1021, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
...at the guests. Besides, the food of the hotels restaurant was delicious. I had a chanc...
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Line 1, column 1403, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...or accommodating for visitors to India. Its the best hotel that I stayed in. If I h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, really, so, in addition, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74904942966 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43816085892 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5652976094 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.3043478261 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4347826087 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4347826087 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227844991631 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797727924263 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812413446295 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227844991631 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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