Causes of overpopulation in big cities
Overpopulation in big cities is attributed to various reasons. One of the viable causes of the issue is the migration from rural to urban areas for occupation opportunities. With the density of businesses, companies, and modern industries located in, urban districts can be considered to offer ample employment opportunities for people. In addition, a lot of people believe that in comparison with agricultural work, big cities ensure higher-paying jobs. Another cause of overcrowding in urban areas is farmers’ relocation in search of better access to educational facilities for their children. The development of big cities can be viewed as a promise that they will provide the best educational environment for children. The final reason for the population density in urban zones is the decline in the death rate. As a result of technological advancement in medical treatment, there are more fatal diseases cured and lifespan has increased considerably. According to Reuters, the US fatalities from causes like heart disease, cancer, and stroke dropped 43 percent between 1969 and 2013. To sum up, the leading causes of the overcrowded problem in big cities are migration for sake of more employment opportunities, better education, and the falling mortality rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as for, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45177664975 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18513256281 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.538706378 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308453273141 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121359040105 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13187369165 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308453273141 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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