It is irrefutable, authority make similar rights for every person either men or women. The question is, it is believed by few masses that to earn money for their needs is the responsibility of both genders. I am agree with a large extent with this statement and will delineate it briefly in subsequent paragraphs.
To spearhead with, what could be the causes behind this, the first and foremost reason is to complete their desires. For annotating it, owing to the technological era, every person run in order to earn money and when spouses go outside for work then they earn huge money, which assist masses to fullfil their family needs as well as their goals, therefore they could effortlessly reside their life in this modern era. Additionally, if both genders do work and earn funds then their family members could live a luxurious lifestyle. For paradigm, a study of Mexico revealed that in Canada 80% spouses do work to earn a living. Consequently, it is benefical for family and couple.
Proceeding further, not only men have rights for outside work but also women have same rights and when women go outside then they could get knowledge how to tackle issues and they could easily solve any predicamemts. Paradoxically, why it is not the responsibility of both men and women to earn a living because women have enough knowledge household chores and they easily do their house work rather than men. Apart from this, men could solve outside problems due to their experience. As a result, it is not necessary to do work for both male and female.
To recaptitulate, although mostly women stay at home for household work but it is the responesibility of both gender to earn a living because to complete needs and to live a luxuary lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...he responsibility of both genders. I am agree with a large extent with this statement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73130005675 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6920062014 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242328817444 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102442754014 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604410457232 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155380983359 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391645025946 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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