The given table compares five various nations which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in terms of the proportion of national customers disbursement in the year 2002.
Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that the majority of expenditures invested into foods, drinks or tobacco. In contrast, leisure, education and clothing, footwear were less favoured to spend on and hold a minor interest.
Looking at the table in more details, in the year 2002, Turkey was the nation had the highest percentage of allocation for foods, drinks and tabacco, roughly at 32%, while Ireland ranked the second place in the surveyed table with 28.91%. And then, followed by the proportion of investment into this category in Spain, Italy and Sweden, with 18.80%, 16.36%, 15.77%, respectively. In terms of clothing or footwear, the percentage of expenditure in Italy was the highest, at 9.00%, which was as half much again as that of in Sweden, at 5.40%.
Interestingly the amount of investment into leisure and education was much less than that of spent on food and clothing and no nation among the given five consumed more than 5% on this category. Turkey once again had the highest number of allocation, with 4.35%, which was twofold in comparison with that of expenditures in Ireland, with 2.21%. In addition, Italy and Sweden had an almost equal in the figure for disbursement on education and leisure, at 3.20% and 3.00%, in turn. The lowest figure was witnessed in the percentage of Spain’s expenditures, with 1.98%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
... in terms of the proportion of national customers disbursement in the year 2002. Looki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10236220472 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72725262413 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3554209494 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0670346232553 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268861036979 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354818927915 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490364651269 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285122308559 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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