Issue: It is important for the political leaders to withhold information from the public
Reason: In diplomatic circumstances, political leaders who are responsible for protecting us need to withhold the truth
I agree with the fact that political leaders should withhold sensitive information from the public for the wellbeing of the future of the nation and its people.
Some issues of the past cannot be fully resolved. Only time will heal the wounds of the past. many countries face the problem of being in war over the borders with other countries. In such cases significant compromises has to be made by the goverment which might not be welcomed by the public. In such case it better to the sensitive details from public as it could potentially start a war.
What if a person who has done many generous contributions to the nation and its people but had a minor criminal history. This might cause wide range panic to the citizens of the country. such sensitive information is best kept hidden considering the impact it will have on the lifes of all the citizens of the country.
if a truth will lead to a better future it should always be chosen. For instance, during nuclear plant deals, albeit false, there is widespread belief among general public that it will adversely affect the living conditions of the people. but if the project is not approved there might be a serious power shortage. In such cases government tends to give grants to the MNCs from foriegn companies. such information if revealed to public will create widespread panic. Sometimes deaths caused by panic from the truth might be higher than the the truth. it is impossible to have complete order in a country. there might be some fringe elements who belive i an ideology which the nation as a whole doesnt represent.
Based on the above points we can strongly agree that it is important for the public leaders to withhold information from general public for the greater good.
- Issue It is important for the political leaders to withhold information from the public Cause In diplomatic circumstances political leaders who are responsible for protecting us need to withhold the truth 50
- Issue It is important for the political leaders to withhold information from the public Reason In diplomatic circumstances political leaders who are responsible for protecting us need to withhold the truth 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
I agree with the fact that political leaders should withhold sensi...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Many
... time will heal the wounds of the past. many countries face the problem of being in ...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...welcomed by the public. In such case it better to the sensitive details from public as...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Such
...e panic to the citizens of the country. such sensitive information is best kept hidd...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...the country. such sensitive information is best kept hidden considering the impact it w...
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Suggestion: If
... of all the citizens of the country. if a truth will lead to a better future it...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of all the citizens of the country. if a truth will lead to a better future it...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...false, there is widespread belief among general public that it will adversely affect the livin...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: But
...ct the living conditions of the people. but if the project is not approved there mi...
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Suggestion: Such
...nts to the MNCs from foriegn companies. such information if revealed to public will ...
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Line 7, column 536, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...nic from the truth might be higher than the the truth. it is impossible to have complet...
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Line 7, column 536, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...nic from the truth might be higher than the the truth. it is impossible to have complet...
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Line 7, column 551, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
...uth might be higher than the the truth. it is impossible to have complete order in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...le to have complete order in a country. there might be some fringe elements who beliv...
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Line 7, column 654, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...ht be some fringe elements who belive i an ideology which the nation as a whole do...
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Line 7, column 694, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...an ideology which the nation as a whole doesnt represent. Based on the above points...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ic leaders to withhold information from general public for the greater good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77631578947 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50577587633 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8857932916 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235738404031 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645924600996 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100209098609 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171471551674 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138592599187 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.