The line graph illustrates changes in the number of visits to and from Britain between 1979 and 1999, while the bar chart compares the top five visited countries by the UK residents in 1999.
Over the period, there were much more trips from the UK than to it. In the beginning of the period, both categories were reported to have similar indexes of around ten million visits. These numbers were rising steadily until 1986 when they reached marks of twenty million and twelve million travels respectively. After that, they started to grow at a rapid pace. In 1999, the final number of visits abroad by UK residents exceeded fifty million, while the number of foreign visits to the UK was slightly under thirty million.
Regarding the most popular destinations, Turkey, Greece, the USA, Spain and France were the most common places for journeys. Nevertheless, Spain and France had the highest marks of nine and eleven million trips respectively. Meanwhile, the USA, Greece and Turkey were almost three times lower, under five million with Turkey having the lowest number of approximately two million.
Overall, there were much more British tourists travelling abroad with Spain and France as most common places to visit than incoming foreign tourists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1512195122 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40891661096 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1340491564 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189059535831 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073426700178 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760238495948 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121381146032 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060150269675 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.