Global warming has gotten a lot of attention in recent decades due to its significant effects on human life all around the world. Although the idea of co-existence between climate change and humans appears attractive, the disadvantages will be far more significant.
To begin with, climate change, which is the result of the ozone layer's depletion in the atmosphere, is harmful for human health because an increase in the earth's temperature is directly proportionate to the incidence of numerous ailments. Furthermore, both terrestrial and aquatic creatures are affected equally since the hotter the temperature gets, the harder it is for animals to find water to drink. Some aquatic animals begin to die because the sea becomes hotter. It has clearly become a threat to our societies, and something must be done to stop it instead of living with it.
On the other hand, there are many more persuasive reasons why coexistence is harmful rather than beneficial. The fact that climate change is created by human activities, consists of toxic fume from vehicles and factories. Another explanation is that rising temperatures and natural calamities have also contributed to the extinction of most species throughout the world. Therefore, we cannot stand by and watch the world go extinct and we have to do something.
In conclusion, while coexisting with climate change appears to be possible in some ways, it is necessary to find out solutions to tackle climate change instead of accepting it.
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019 64
- Some people think that public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free to the people who use it To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Many people think good planning is a key factor for life success Others think other factors are more important hard working luck etc Discuss both views and give your opinion 71
- Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems Others however believe technology is the way to solve these problems Discuss both views and give you 73
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...human health because an increase in the earths temperature is directly proportionate t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e change is created by human activities, consists of toxic fume from vehicles and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20746887967 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89417822987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630705394191 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7666124112 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187874505088 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629081938565 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643895220363 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114154620745 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710839042558 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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