You have invited a friend to come to your house next holiday. He/she has asked you how to get to your house from the airport to receive him/her.
write a letter to your friend
in your letter:
- explain that you will meet him/her at the airport
- say what you have planned for your friend
- write some important things that he/she might find useful
Dear Dodi,
How are you? hopefully you and your family are in a good condition. I am writing this latter to inform about party on my house in next holiday.
Actualy I will go to the airport when you arrive, so don't worry about route to my house. and I have make special bedroom for you, and parfume that you like most. it is very hard to find the parfume because it's not familiar in my house, then I look for it in the city and I found the parfume. and also after party we can go to the museum and some tourism attraction that popular in my vilage. And do you remember about the book that we look for in the school last month, I just bought the book online because many librarries that I have visited and I can't find the book. so you will be third person who read it if you come to my house, I am very grateful to have this book.
It's been a long time since we have seen each other. And I will really happy if you can attend to my party. Waiting to meet you soon.
Take care.
With love
Suraji
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hopefully
Dear Dodi, How are you? hopefully you and your family are in a good condi...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...l go to the airport when you arrive, so dont worry about route to my house. and I ha...
^^^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... so dont worry about route to my house. and I have make special bedroom for you, an...
^^^
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...or you, and parfume that you like most. it is very hard to find the parfume becaus...
^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...it in the city and I found the parfume. and also after party we can go to the museu...
^^^
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ny librarries that I have visited and I cant find the book. so you will be third per...
^^^^
Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... have visited and I cant find the book. so you will be third person who read it if...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.065 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91884731024 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8672076971 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5384615385 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274112624045 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100075706366 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801511572255 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211702909732 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610928767084 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.73 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.