The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites
on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the
information shown below.
The given line graph illustrates the number of two music sites visitors over the span of 15 days. The line for Music choice website is marked in red while Pop Parade visitors are marked in blue.
Overall, excluding a short time span, the number of Pop Parada visitors were more than that of Music choice. Although the blue line had
eye-catching fluctuations, over the course of 11 days red line was relatively steady.
To begin with, 120 visitors prioritized the Pop parada website on the first day nevertheless only 40 visitors chose the music choice. While the former website's viewers fluctuated around 220, that of music choice experienced a drop then a dramatic soar to 60 people over a 3-day period. Alternatively, the pop porada visitors sharply deteriorated until the seventh day hitting the bottom of almost 38 visitors. In addition, this category considerably surged from day 9 to 11. However the happened in the 15th day which number for this figure reached 160 people.
Alternatively, the Music choice contributors were totally less than the other group over the first 11-day timescale. However, the figure reversed for next two days while this category reached 120 and 110 viewers, respectively. It is worth to be noted, although allocating the same number of viewers in the 12th and 14th day, the Pop paracha contributed 40 viewers more than that in the latter day. Notably, the viewers number at the last day for Pop proda was almost double of that for the Music choice.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-07-04 | Sarina2021 | 73 | view |
| 2021-09-23 | Sanaullah97 | 73 | view |
| 2021-09-23 | Sanaullah97 | 61 | view |
| 2021-08-29 | Phạm Thi | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-17 | Nicholas Sukardi | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 475, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...y considerably surged from day 9 to 11. However the happened in the 15th day which numb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, nevertheless, so, then, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96015936255 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62360202143 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3656581369 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111372720529 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507522151698 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503482122783 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697319468613 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515811445172 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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