The diagram describes the life cycle of the honey bee.
Overall, there are various steps involved in the reproduction of the honey bee, from the laying of female honey bee every 3 days to the complete development of mature adult insects.It’s obvious that the whole process takes between 34 and 36 days.
At the beginning of the process, the female adult spawns one or two eggs every 3 days after mating each other.These eggs are incubated and then hatch into nymphs after a period of 9 to 10 days.In the subsequent nine days after doing that, the nymph moults up to three times as it grows in size.
Looking at the moulting process, this happens five days after the nymph forms itself into a baby honey bee.In two-day following period, the honey bee gains in size gradually.After that, it continues to grow in body shape, it becomes bigger than one in the old days.Then, these devloping honey bees turn themself into the young adults.Eventually, the maturing honey bees have to go through 4 days in their life to develop into the fully-matured ones.Finally, the cycle begins again when they mate to lay eggs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78238341969 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70007352819 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.728939896 43.030603864 376% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.75 112.824112599 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.25 22.9334400587 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297931465102 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.287237339834 0.103423049105 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.265175523035 0.0843802449381 314% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287237339834 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.265175523035 0.0819641961636 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 10.3012195122 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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