The chart shows the depth of snow cm in a particular resort in Canada in three individual years

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The chart shows the depth of snow (cm) in a particular resort in Canada in three individual years

The bar graph illustrates the monthly average snow depth in a specific ski resort in Canada three different years.
Overall, the amount of snow is higher in the period of 3 months, from February to April. In terms of the period between November and January, the average depth of snow in Year Two is the lowest among the three years.
In November, the quantity of snow in Year Three remains the highest, which was nearly 110 cm. This was followed by the figure for Year One, standing at 100cm and the lowest belonged to Year Two with around 90cm. This trend remains to January in three years, the highest average snow depth of around 170cm was observed in Year Three, which was a moderate increase of approximately 60cm. The figure for Year One experienced a rise to 150cm, while Year Two saw a slight increase to 120cm.
In February, the quantity of snow in Year One increased sharply to around 440cm, which was the highest among three years. This number is followed by 400cm witnessed in Year Two and 350cm in Year One. In April, the snow depth in Year Two was the highest, which reached the peak of 470cm. This was followed by the figure for Year One and year two, which were 370cm and 250cm respectively

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55963302752 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24056157064 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44495412844 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4428544581 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3636363636 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285715774084 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138917941085 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625762351886 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205064768544 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332478506351 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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