Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m living in house 313 which is in your neighborhood, right beside your
house. Yesterday I received a complaint letter about the loud sounds from my own house.
Firstly, I have to apologize to you for being noisy and annoying you recently. That is the
reason why I wrote this explanation letter to you immediately and hope you could understand my situation.
First of all, again, I feel so sorry for having been annoyed yesterday. However, I had some reasons for those uncomfortable noises which you could consider. As you know, I am a musician, this is to say, a piano player. I had a music band, and we are going to perform our new songs to people in City Center Park, we were excited about this opportunity. Therefore, our band prepared carefully for this special occasion by practicing playing the instrument non-stop, and unfortunately, this action affected you yesterday.
Moreover, unluckily, we have received numerous same letter for 2 days. From the bottom of my heart, I truly regretted our bad action, and we were begging you all pardon while were composing this apology. We are so sorry!
On the other hand, luckily, we found another perfect place to practice, which is right nearby the river and in the middle of grassland. It has truly a long distance from our neighborhood, so you all do not concern about our annoying noise now. This is the most effective solution for both two sites. Hope you have a good day!
With the faithful,
Hieu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in your neighborhood, right beside your house. Yesterday I received a complaint ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and annoying you recently. That is the reason why I wrote this explanation lett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, i feel, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6765310309 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7982119592 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1333333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288267952785 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942905425097 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472558996358 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144682982386 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388195296855 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.