There has been controversy on whether children might be well brought-up with homeschooling, While some individuals are of this opinion, I would contend that education at school yields more outcomes.
On the one hand, many people believe their offspring might be raised better at home for several reasons. To begin with, homeschooling where child learns with a teacher without peers, who might disturb him to concentrate on the lessons. Kids are susceptible to temptation from their friends. Things would go worse if their friends had the ill-manner behaviors. As a consequence, child neglect their stufy, immerse himself on games, meetings or in the worst case, those might be lawful activities ranging from gambling, ancohol drinking to drugs, meaning that, they would not only be a strain on family, but also a burden on society. The another culprits for this fact is that, child learning at home are able to follow a conformable curriculum. I mean childdren who are fail to keep up with the work load at school can cultivate their skills virtue of teacher's strict supervision while teacher at school are unable to focus on a student. Besides that, genius students who are bored with classic lessons at school should be taught a higher levels of study.
On the other hand, I completely argue that children should be received a normal education. Kids demand a study enviroment which has their own peers to grow up completely. There has lots of children fail to be harmonious with society after studying at home. Homeschooling render them difficult to catch up with a conversation with others while another people express that one as a grufff and stony person. Another reasons supporting for my arguement is that studying at home costs lots of money. Consequently, parents struggling with financial strain can not affort for this type of education, meaning that, only overprivileged students enrol in which creates the discrimination between two classics since kid's childhood. The last but not least culprits worth mentioning is that having peers in children's education facilitates them cultivating theirs esential and social skills such as team-working skill and presentation skill, which gain tremendous benefits to children in their adulthood.
In conculsion, I agree that homeschooling is an interesting and new way of education, however, I am more convinced that, children are the the best brought-up at school with their peers and socities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, well, while, i mean, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23350253807 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8657598567 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571065989848 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5500071074 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.294117647 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261124319561 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855653164737 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588534190646 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158838168125 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239786694842 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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