It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, for sports or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A few people opine that talent of being a good sportsperson or musician is inbuilt while others cogitate that children can be trained to play sports or music. I think that skills are both inborn and instilled and I would be explaining both the viewpoints in my essay.
To commence with, some people are indeed born with incomparable talents. In other words, it is not even required, sometimes, to introduce people to their field of expertise. They just find their way through the thick and thin. I would like to illustrate an example here, there has been well known child prodigies. Mozart and Bento Asis, both had excelled in music and golf at the age of 4 and 2 respectively with limited guidance and assistance from parents or coaches. Hence, without inherent talent, it is not possible for children to acquire such fame.
However, it is also believed by few people that skills can be taught to children. To elaborate, children often become interested in the activities by looking up to the elders. In such cases, if parents divert the attention of youngsters towards sports or music and required training is provided, they are able to learn faster. For instance, Katy Perry did not sing at all until age of nine but when she was given training in music and dance, she never had to look back. Therefore, once the children show dedication and effort in learning something it is possible for them to be talented.
In conclusion, I would reiterate that people can either have a natural inbuilt talent or it can be imbibed. I would also argue that, morning shows the days and a little encouragement can go a long way.
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- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sports or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views an 61
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sports or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician Discuss both these views an 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75265017668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59591084923 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9511442976 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300734479773 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862794556208 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640542443505 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16824562814 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518062183116 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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