Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
In fact, there are many differences between males and females. The most common one is that women are always considered to be the weakness while men are supposed to be a symbol of strengths. However, it's not always true about that and it's very unfair to exclude males or females from certain jobs just because of their gender.
When it comes to the workplace, I think the best way to consider somebody is to look into their ability, not their gender. The reason is that they both have the potential ability to do what the others can do. For example, in the past, women had few opportunities to go to school, so they could not be involved in any social jobs. But now, when females can achieve proper education, they can do anything that men do.
Nevertheless, in our modern society, people are still discriminated against in professions. They still regard some jobs as men's jobs and some others as women-jobs. It is really unequal when someone just wants to do a job but then, they become an awkward situation because the majority is the other-gender employees.
In conclusion, I believe that everyone has the same potential ability in any field, so there is no reason to exclude one of them from certain professions because they can do it if they have a chance.
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- Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender 56
- Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...d to be a symbol of strengths. However, its not always true about that and its very...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66964285714 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59203979148 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1844154961 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0909090909 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277476914237 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933146331877 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721975698204 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168629838127 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102926192947 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.