All students should be required to take the driver's education course at Centerville High School. In the past two years, several accidents in and around Centerville have involved teenage drivers. Since a number of parents in Centerville have complained that they are too busy to teach their teenagers to drive, some other instruction is necessary to ensure that these teenagers are safe drivers. Although there are two driving schools in Centerville, parents on a tight budget cannot afford to pay for driving instruction. Therefore an effective and mandatory program sponsored by the high school is the only solution to this serious problem."
"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated."
The author has two concern in his claim above. first is, ensuring financial support in major cities in order to develop. The second one is, To be developed as a nation, developing cultural sectors must be the primary concern of a Gov. I disagree with the authors claims.
Firstly, cultural traditions is not admittedly, one of the primary sectors that ensures the livelihood, security, education of the citizen of a nation. Let’s talk about a whole nation first. A nation’s development depends mostly on economic and educational progress in the first hand. Without strong economic base no govt can maintain national affairs let alone international ones. A nation to thrive the basic needs of citizen such as home, adequate food,treatment,education first have to be fulfilled in every cities of a country as a nation’s development depends on the betterment of every cities country.
Secondly, development of a country depends on the development of both large and small cities. it should be completely out of concern that whether the large cities are met with financial support or not. Each city should be supported adequately in order to thrive.
The third point is, The cultural tradions,traditional arts,musics are evolved mostly in rural areas of a country.Lets give an example of Bangladeshi cultural traditions. Old folk songs, one of the finest assests of cultural traditons of this country,were created by bauls,dervishes of rural areas.Its totally irrational of the author to say that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated in cities.
Finally, To make a country culturally enriched private organizations should work. The cultural traditions should be matter of concern of private organizations .
- Students should memorize facts only after they have studied the ideas trends and concepts that help explain those facts Students who have learned only facts have learned very little 66
- Most cultures encourage individuals to sacrifice a large part of their own personalities in order to be like other people Thus most people are afraid to think or behave differently because they do not want to be exclude 50
- Scientists and researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive because it is primarily in 50
- Students should memorize facts only after they have studied the ideas trends and concepts that help explain those facts Students who have learned only facts have learned very little 50
- All students should be required to take the driver s education course at Centerville High School In the past two years several accidents in and around Centerville have involved teenage drivers Since a number of parents in Centerville have complained that 16
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47524752475 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35724754271 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.4259666389 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541837434458 0.243740707755 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226759179424 0.0831039109588 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238066112315 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0310419342507 0.150359130593 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225510531733 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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