How you attract tourists to your city

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How you attract tourists to your city?

Can Tho is known as the capital of the Mekong Delta and this is also my hometown. Every year, my lovely hometown welcomes lots of tourists for its natural beauty, friendly people, and unique culture so I highly recommend you to come to my delightful city at least once. First of all, there are a range of exciting places to go, for instance, Cai Rang floating market is a widespread place for tourists since this market gives tourists the experience of buying things in the river instead of on the ground as usual, and you might watch the fantastic sunrise on the river if you go early in the morning. Additionally, Ninh Kieu Key is a destination not to be missed for visitors who have the opportunity to go to Can Tho city. There is a range of restaurants for you to taste traditional food and you can join an evening boat trip on the Hau river, you could listen to the music and performances of Nam Bo, enjoy delicious specialties, and admire the Can Tho Bridge. Last but not least, Binh Thuy ancient house must be in your journey of exploring Can Tho. It attracts a majority of tourists since it helps you know more about life in the past of this area because it's filled with features that represent rural life in the Mekong Delta region and if you are lucky enough, you may hear the housekeeper tell about the daily life of a Can Tho family over a century ago. Besides, food is also a highlight of any trip to Can Tho. The sellers use freshwater fish and shrimp, local vegetables, and Vietnamese cooking techniques to make mouthwatering dishes you never forget like hu tieu Sa Dec, Lau mam, Com tam, or Banh xeo. To sum up, Can Tho is the perfect place to slow down and take a breath, and this is also an ideal place to find adventures and new experiences that you will remember for a lifetime.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...au mam, Com tam, or Banh xeo. To sum up, Can Tho is the perfect place to slow dow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, at least, for instance, you know, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4024024024 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47393504135 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.2804569881 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216673439843 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690527159691 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596669680018 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216673439843 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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