In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years flaunting weapons has become a fashion in various nations. Due to possession of firearms by denizens, cases of shootings are rising day by day. I totally agree with this statement and the contributing factors will be scrutinized in the forthcoming paragraphs before venturing a logical conclusion.
Allowing public to keep guns at their homes is one of the big reasons behind the violence. This trend not only normalizes the weapon culture in the country, but also promote the domestic crimes. If authorities allow citizens of their nation to purchase arms without any license, it would be difficult to control the cases of crime in households. In countries like America for instance, there are no restrictions on buying ammunition, which ends up in plethora of cases of gunpoint robberies in various areas. Thus, it is essential to impose some restriction on possession of weapons by public.
Manufacturing and supply of illegal firearms is another point of concern. Though in some regions obtaining license is a compulsion before buying weapons, some unlawful trading of rifles and similar items give access to everyone for buying them. Uttar Pradesh state of India is the best example while talking about producing and supplying illegal armaments in most of the areas of northern India. Despite various strict actions by the police and government, smugglers are selling the pistols without any fear.
To conclude, possession of firearms in almost every house is a matter of concern these days. Availability of guns for everyone should be restricted which can be achieved with the efforts of government and the concerned authorities. There is a long way to keep situation under control, however some countries have already achieved that. Imposing punishments and penalties on unnecessary ownership of weapons can be another way to control the rate of incidents which have taken a toll in the past few years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22186495177 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81392555421 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5601265008 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104632510039 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300940384203 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365810129882 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557485896765 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142219161801 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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