Nowadays many families have both parents working Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others think childcare centers provide the best care Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today’s world, many families have changed to become working parents. Modern parents do not have so much time to raise their offspring anymore, thus parents have to rely on other family members or relative to help take care of their kids instead. However, some argue that it would be a better idea to bring kids to childcare organizations. Both views will be discussed carefully.

To begin with, people who believe that family members such as grandparents can be a great baby-minder for their kids than others assert for a couple reasons. Firstly, as grandparents have passed parenting for t...

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many families have changed to become working parents. Modern parents do not have so much time to raise their offspring anymore, thus parents have to rely on other family members or relative to help take care of their kids instead.

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many families members have changed to become working parents who do not have much time to raise their offspring anymore, and have to rely on other family members or relatives to help take care of their kids instead.

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