Some people prefer having deep knowledge about one particular subject, while others prefer having general knowledge about many subjects. Which do you prefer and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Nowadays, people all around the world starts to engage in a wider range of activities that are either indoor or outdood. Whether indoor or outdoor, having a great variety of knowledge on different topics or in disparate fields would be beneficial. Personally, I am in favor of knowing knowledge in miscellaneous subjects rather than diving really deep into a particular field. I think this way for mainly two reasons, which will be explored in the paragraphs that follow.
First and foremost, people should absorb knowledge in different topics to braoden their horizon and to see the world in different perspectives. This not only allows them to partake in various activies, but it also gives them the opportunities to befriend with people from other cultural, ethnic, and national backgrounds. This is best exemplified by my personal experience. In 2015, my family traveled to Japan for tourism purpose. We went to Sapporo to all the different sites, including ice cream stores, central park, sky tower, etc. At each location, I made different friends. In the ice cream shop, I started to chat with the associate about the ice cream-making processes because I am really a huge fan of ice crean; at the central park, I talked to a Japanese female in Japanese and English, I figured that she did not speak much English, so we spoke mostly in Japanese, and we conversed about the history of the park, from how it was constructed to why it went under three further renewed constructions; on the top of the sky tower, I, again, bantered with an old man about his experience as a Japanese soldier during the WWII, where he served as a pilot. I immediately recognized that I had the ability to start conversations with people from different parts of society, and this further reinforced my opinion to gain more knowledge on different subjects.
Furthermore, knowing many things and possessing knowledge on different subjects allow people to provide support and assistance to others in times of need and emergency: a disaster, a family issues, or professional request. These may all result in problems within a family. If people have the knowledge to provide comprehensive help, it would be really supportive and beneficial. For example, my next-door neighbor was called by his boss for a mandatory presentation at his company; this presentation is to be given to the company's new clients, and if he does not attend, he will be fired immediately. As a result, he was desperately in need of someone to take care of his one-year-old daughter and a teenage boy at home. Being aware of his emergency, my mother told him that she got this and went to his house right away. This job was a piece of cake for my mom as she has a general knowledge of many subjects. She took care of the baby's physiological needs, inlcuding food, milk, excretion, and affection. She constantly changed her diaper.l as for the teenage boy, she was able to taught him math, physical science, arts, and history. After my neighbor returned, he appreciated my mom for being so supportive and appreciated her ability to manage his two kids so well without any difficulties. My mom gave me a lesson on how to manage my adult life: the gist is to know everything but don't just know one subject.
To sun up, having knowledge about a lot of subjects is a really important element in one's life. This not only helps oneself to grow and know more people, but it also allows a person to lend a hand to those who have difficulty with their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, as for, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 52.1666666667 173% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2897.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 604.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79635761589 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83002137552 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 316.0 212.727598566 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 918.0 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.22093719 48.9658058833 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.88 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.16 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154121932507 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468221068832 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545846811272 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108973714855 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305020072507 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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