In some nations, students do not pay any tuition to attend universities. However, in other nations, students must pay to attend universities, and the cost of university tuition can be high. Do you believe that all nations should use taxes to fully fund universities so that students can study for free?
Education, the foundation of countries, is playing more and more role in the development of a person. Some people claim that all nations should provide fund to universities using taxes in order to free tuition for students. However, I disagree with this statement.
Paying their universities’ costs contributes to their studies. Unsurprisingly, it is common that the majority of people will not cherish the things that they get easily. Therefore, studying for free might undermine their motivation to cherish the chance to universities, let alone studying hard. Take my own experience as an example. Having difficulties in mathematics when I was in 14 years old, I signed on a renowned extracurricular class which was expensive, equivalent to one month salary of my mother. Faced to so high charge, I concentrated on the lecture and did not waste one minute in class. Fortunately, at the end of the semester, I got a great advance in the math exam because of high concentration and hard studying brought by high extracurricular tuition fees. In contrast, although the school sometimes spend a lot of money to invite experts to us lecture and we could listen without paying, I often distracted by other things, such as chatting on Facebook,reading novels, or reading news. Therefore, universities fees is beneficial to high study efficiency and quality.
Paying college tuition helps boost work experience. In order to get school fees, a great of people will choose to do a part time job which offers them an advantage in future job search such as related work experience or good quality. Take my brother’s experience as an example, he had to do one or two part-time job in school to get enough money for tuition. As majoring in computer science, his skills such as writing code, optimize code, and deal with bug, was honed greatly during a variety of part-time jobs. Therefore, when he was interviewing for a job in his senior year, he got many offers from many big technology companies thanks to the precious experience and proficient coding skills. On the contrary, if he did not need to pay for the university fees, he would have no so much work experience.
Admittedly, it is true that not every student have enough money to pay for college. It is possible that some talent student might lost the chance to study in universities due to expensive tuition. However, most of students could do part-time job to save money or get loan from bank. As long as we study hard, I believe they must be able to repay the loan after graduation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 973, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reading
...her things, such as chatting on Facebook,reading novels, or reading news. Therefore, uni...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
..., a great of people will choose to do a part time job which offers them an advantage in f...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...mple, he had to do one or two part-time job in school to get enough money for tuiti...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...ties due to expensive tuition. However, most of students could do part-time job to save money or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, in contrast, such as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 30.3222958057 191% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.01324503311 379% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1373.03311258 154% => OK
No of words: 431.0 270.72406181 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91183294664 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95370290861 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 145.348785872 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54524361949 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 419.366225166 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2813645566 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2272727273 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218058432667 0.272083759551 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633936524243 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782086259412 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146107488636 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607541946559 0.0443174109184 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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