In this day and era, self-employment has been becoming the norm and more and more workers prefer it to being an employee at a company or organisation. In this essay, I will outlist the reasons for this phenomenon and its potential drawbacks.
There are numerous factors leading to the popularity of self-employment. Firstly, of the most importance, the aid of the Internet and social media’s huge international influence. Along with the rapid development of those, a myriad of new jobs have appeared, such as KOLs, Tiktoker, Youtuber, Influencer, Digital Marketer, etc, which provides people a considerable number of career potentials. Secondly, nowadays, young generations usually prefer a comfortable, mobile work environment to boost their creativity. Instead of a fixed nine-to-five work frame and workforce, self-employed workers can start their work whenever and switch up environments between home, cafes, or even on the go. As a result, they have more freedom and ideas, which is believed to foster productivity to some extent.
However, there also exists some disadvantages of working as a freelancer. The first of which is unstable income. While staffs in a company receive a particular monthly or annual salary, freelancers' income tends to fluctuate due to a wide range of external factors, for example, number of orders, a lack of creativity, etc. Moreover, working from home is not as effortless as the majority of the public expect. In contrast, it requires a high level of self-discipline and the ability to handle everything alone. At a corporation or organisation, an employee is being constantly reminded of their deadlines and able to get immediate assistance if they need, whereas a person who is self-employed has to manage their own selves without any aid from other colleagues. Therefore, multiple people drop their occupation as freelancers after a short period of time.
In conclusion, self-employment has its pros and cons and if a person wants to choose it, then he should be mentally prepared for a fluctuating amount of money he may earn and various characteristics to address everything reasonably alone. Unless he got it all, it would be likely that he cannot maintain the career in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...occupation as freelancers after a short period of time. In conclusion, self-employment has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25977653631 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22159570402 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628491620112 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2717006824 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.764705882 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271091246991 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658776360732 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624845225142 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162572090374 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516665644402 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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