Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individuals think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports should be an integral part of everyone's life which brings a healthy lifestyle. There are various kinds of sports playing in a different fashion, for instance, football, cricket is being played in teams whereas, table tennis, swimming is more likely individual games. In the upcoming paragraphs, I am going to discuss both sides and conclude it as per my vision.
First of all, playing in teams benefits someone a lot. For example, football, which is a popular game around the globe, has been playing in teams which would be helpful to improve teamwork, leadership, and communication. According to research, 99% of the time, playing in teams help sportsmen to build up their skills as described earlier. In addition to that, while growing up, during work environment, most times people have to work in teams.
Secondly, certain people believe that sports like tennis and swimming is also play an important role in someone's lives. Playing alone comes with some bad qualities such as selfishness, envy, and many more. For instance, people can not take care of or never worry about someone else's problems.
To sum up, both the views, playing alone is not a bad habit, however, playing in teams definitely has more advantages than others. Personally, I would believe that parents should let their kids playing in teams so that they become socially more active rather than just sticking up with technological gadgets.
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individuals think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis or swimming Discuss both 56
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individuals think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis or swimming Discuss both 56
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individuals think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis or swimming Discuss both 56
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individuals think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis or swimming Discuss both 56
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different fashion" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ere are various kinds of sports playing in a different fashion, for instance, football, cricket is bei...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...sports like tennis and swimming is also play an important role in someones lives. Pl...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60126909805 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4271480074 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273767446273 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884020349363 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516120756995 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153726206271 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657808817938 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different fashion" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ere are various kinds of sports playing in a different fashion, for instance, football, cricket is bei...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...sports like tennis and swimming is also play an important role in someones lives. Pl...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60126909805 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4271480074 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273767446273 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884020349363 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516120756995 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153726206271 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657808817938 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.