Nowadays, people are more obsessed with buying material things like expensive clothes and cars. Therefore, a lot of people change cars and buy a lot of clothes these days. I think it is because people judge each other according to their possessions. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, you can guess the degree of a job or money by car or clothes at first impression. Everyone wants to look luxurious and rich. People envy and never ignore them. In this first impression, people buy more expensive things because people rate these things. For example, I think I am forced to evaluate after seeing my first impression. When I see people who have luxury bags or expensive cars, I think they have a lot of money, and when I see people whose clothes are all stretched out, I feel a little sad.
Next, some people want to show off their wealth. Most people envy people who live in big houses and carry good cars because they have a lot of money. Then, there are people who have a lot of money who want to show off their money, who want to be envied by using money in clothes or bags to show their pocket money, even though they do not have a lot of money. For instance, some celebrities had their homes all decorated with luxury goods, all of which were fake. It turns out that people like this image, so they wanted to look good while lying.
Last, because all expensive clothes look pretty. People praise clothes as unique, thinking that they have the designer’s thoughts if they are too expensive, no matter how ugly and bad quality they are. However, ordinary clothes are pretty, but many people buy clothes suspicious because of the price. Therefore people want to find more expensive clothes and be judged well by people.
This is why I think people are more obsessed with buying material things like expensive clothes or cars. It is because it has a big impact on the first impression, shows ability and is thought to be prettier. Therefore, I think it is because people want to look better to others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lothes suspicious because of the price. Therefore people want to find more expensive clot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59400544959 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29025192526 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474114441417 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0152410696 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6363636364 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464438715477 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166037707371 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146830646001 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327421716371 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141478840171 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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