You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear James,
I am concerned about your health and i have been praying for your fast recovery.
I was quite worried, because the way u fell in the ground with your straight face made each of us feel shaking.
well, talking about the last match, we won in the first position. but to be honest, we all were not feeling that much happy with your absence and also the accident which occured during the game. After u went to hospital, we all were distracted and got stressed out so we could not think about a thing.
well we surely lost our concentration but the dedication u gave till the last minute gave us a strength and we strongly beleived that we can do it. we all are here cheering for our team but your absence made us feel sad. I hope u recover soon and be here by our side practicing.
Yours sincerly,
Sumee
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ht face made each of us feel shaking. well, talking about the last match, we w...
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Suggestion: Well
... face made each of us feel shaking. well, talking about the last match, we won ...
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Suggestion:
...ll, talking about the last match, we won in the first position. but to be honest,...
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Suggestion: But
...t match, we won in the first position. but to be honest, we all were not feeling t...
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Suggestion:
...at much happy with your absence and also the accident which occured during the ga...
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Suggestion:
...ut so we could not think about a thing. well we surely lost our concentration bu...
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Suggestion: Well
...we could not think about a thing. well we surely lost our concentration but th...
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Suggestion:
...r side practicing. Yours sincerly, Sumee
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, well, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37662337662 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28009936076 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0493488923 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110607279508 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538104603202 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325020253815 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697243040993 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195887962249 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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