Some people believe that in order to give opportunities for new generation, companies should encourage employees who are older than 55yrs to retire compulsory. Do you agree or disagree.
Due to the advancement in technological and medical fields, senior citizens are healthier and more active than before. This is the age of economic recession and unemployment. There has been a growing debate as to whether or not these people should retire in order to create jobs for younger generation. I partially agree with this policy of compulsory retirement at the age of fifty five yrs.
There are several arguments for allowing older people to continue working as long as they are able. Firstly, older employees have an immense amount of knowledge and experience. A few employees in their si...
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