Compare the popular music of different countries
I think there are many difference between European pop music and Chinese music . And the style and the music instruments are different. But I think the most different place is the way to express the feeling.
In Europe there are many traditional styles, such as jazz, blues, rock music and so on. These kinds of music have a long history. But Chinese music has fewer variaties,because our music develops in later years. And the music intruments are different. As whole, the sound of European music intruments are stronger than Chinese music instruments'.
Now many peope like European music,especially pop music. And most people think their music attracts them more. I think , the bigges reason is that their rhyme is stronger, and can strongly arouse their feelings . On the onther hand , most of us do not konw the meaning of the songs, so we feel that it is more beautiful.
Sentence: But Chinese music has fewer variaties,because our music develops in later years.
Error: variaties Suggestion: varieties
Sentence: And the music intruments are different.
Error: intruments Suggestion: instruments
Sentence: As whole, the sound of European music intruments are stronger than Chinese music instruments'.
Error: intruments Suggestion: instruments
Sentence: Now many peope like European music,especially pop music.
Error: peope Suggestion: people
Sentence: I think , the bigges reason is that their rhyme is stronger, and can strongly arouse their feelings .
Error: bigges Suggestion: biggest
Sentence: On the onther hand , most of us do not konw the meaning of the songs, so we feel that it is more beautiful.
Error: konw Suggestion: know
Error: onther Suggestion: other
flaws:
No. of Words: 151 350 //more content wanted. minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 151 350
No. of Characters: 699 1500
No. of Different Words: 88 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.505 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.629 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.298 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 37 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.536 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.435 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5