Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion
It is considered by many individuals that rural areas provide feasible living conditions to maintain a healthy lifestyle, while there are few who think that urban residents obtain more health advantages in terms of advanced health care facilities. In my perspective, the latter notion has better prospects to stay fit as compared to the former. This essay, therefore, will discuss both the aspects along with my opinion and will provide a logical conclusion.
Undoubtedly, countryside regions are considered as natural habitats which assist to sustain a healthy way of life, since it has a serene and holistic environment. This appears to be because of low air and noise pollution, which is the key factor behind the aforementioned notion. The presence of atmospheric pollutants is quite low, since industries are almost absent here. In India, for instance, the Air Quality Index of cities, such as Delhi and Ludhiana, reached upto hazardous level, whereas it lies between good to moderate in countryside terrain. Good health, consequently, can easily be maintained by people who live in villages.
Conversely, despite knowing the importance of rural landscapes as discussed, I strongly believe that metropolitan cities bestow more health benefits, as they have a greater number of hospitals and health care appliances. It is, moreover, easy for urban dwellers to access these facilities. Major cities of U.S.A, for example, have an immense number of renowned hospitals, where patients frequently visit for treatment from all across the world. As a consequence, 90-95% U.S. citizens like to live in towns. Beyond this, another contributing factor is lush greenery parks facilitated with advanced equipment. This will not only provide the tranquil ambience to reduce the mental stress, but locals can also do some physical workout. It is, hence, evident that cities confer greater health amenities.
In conclusion, as per my perception, even if rural topography provides favorable climatic conditions to sustain a healthy way of living, everyone should reside in urban areas to avail the modern health care facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45151515152 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88032654255 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645454545455 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2169323168 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182693778957 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473904305013 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472444944847 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930048954271 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343144406802 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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