Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, it is apparent that individuals are appealing to the notion of establishing private businesses in preference to enlisting themselves in enterprises due to its engaging mercies. This essay will analyze the causes of this phenomenon as well as the downsides that entrepreneurs may have to deal with.
On the one hand, with the rapid pace of innovation, people often come up with novel ideas. They would rather materialize these proposals to do startups than seek opportunities to be recruited by organizations. As they desire to be beyond bosses’ control and achieve economic self-sufficiency as well as flexibility in schedules and deadlines. Besides, young businessmen establish their own companies mostly since their passions are to unlock new potentials and experience challenges in society prior to thriving. To illustrate, COX Business discovered that half of the enterprise owners were motivated by the idea of creating something from the ground up and their particularly initial goals were freedom and satisfaction.
On the other hand, operating a start-up may not guarantee stable incomes together with permanent uptime for entrepreneurs. Most businessmen, especially youngsters lack motivation and patience in attracting clients during the initial periods of their self-employment as they have not accumulated paramount knowledge or built relationships. High ego and ignoring others’ constructive suggestions are also the culprit of erroneous decisions. They may experience a notable decline in sales and the worst scenario is bankruptcy. For instance, Startup Genome has announced that 9 out of 10 startups fail in the first year of operations. Furthermore, company operators also face the risk of acquisition by a larger business. As their products are mostly exclusive, owners of big enterprises may hunt for chances for corporate mergers. Therefore, self-employed individuals may lose their own brands and have to serve senior officers.
To sum up, becoming a boss may be profitable and a worthy experience. However, entrepreneurs should be aware of risks and obstacles that may challenge them before starting a business.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60281690141 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32280477027 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.116318829 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.45 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376133289887 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127568789738 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189256829874 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263435928444 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.329099199248 0.056905535591 578% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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