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With an increasing number of people eating fast food which if eating regularly can cause health issues some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely To what extent do you agree

Consuming fast food is becoming prominent with a huge number of people eating it on a daily basis, which can do a disservice for our health. For that rationale, several individuals suppose that prohibiting junk food is the only way of addressing the health problems. From my perspective, I can not deny that this solution has effects on people’s eating habit but there are a number of better approaches .
On the one hand, there is no doubt that imposing a ban on fast food is a good solution. First and foremost, if the government forbids firms from producing junk food or giving a heavy punishment to residents eating this kind of food , fast food consumption have a tendency to witness a significant drop. For the reason that, junk food is no longer available to customers and none of them are willing to fork out an exorbitant price for just breaking the rule. Instead, numerous people may cook at home as a last resort, henceforth , they can be better-informed and have enough expertise to make difference between the hygiene and healthy food and the fat-containing ones. However, not only is this solution unfavourable but also hinders economic enhancement. With occupied working couples who cannot cook proper meals every day,these packaged meals are a boon. Banning junk food will also make life difficult for the poor sections of the society as multiple people live on selling this food.
In order to reduce the the consumption of fast food, there are far better remedies can be implementes. It can be easily seen that in these days ,healthy food is more extravagant than junk food, henceforth,its consumption and popularity are much less than its counterpart. A good approach to this phenomenon is manulfacturing these healthy meals with a radical price and popularize it for the residents. Furthermore, it is up to the government to launch a campaign to raise awareness of its habitants about detrimental impacts of junk food propagate to family and friends and how the consumer’s responsibility to control their diet is of importance.
In conclusion, banning fast food may be beneficial in certain cases ,nevertheless, it is much better to make use of all this aforementioned solutions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02459016393 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03969619198 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565573770492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0480908037 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259814660857 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941246818404 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079385752176 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169978184808 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114215421296 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments