Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible
some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.i agree with such people. corporations should also take in care of societies and environment. In well functioning of corporations the societies and environment plays an important role. Many of these corporations also damage or effect the surroundings in one or other way. Hence its there moral duty to take care of near by societies and environment.
firstly,take example of rubber industries. Such industries not only pollute the environment by adding pollutants but also depend heavily on near by societies for well functioning.These type of corporations not only depend on societies for labour but also for other requirements. This bring in mind the Bhopal gas tragedy, an accident in which resulted in death of thousands of innocent people.
secondly,All corporations does need transportation facilities leading to increase in number of vehicle in the surroundings hence rising air and noise pollution whose ill effects are taken by societies in which they work.corporations not only pollute air but also pollute soil and water in case of many industrial work.they use resourcers of the surroundings for there need.
All corporations does effect the environment in a negative way. they lead to all kind of pollution.Insecurity to the society and heavily consume there resources.Hence in order to compensate all these harmful effects they should consider well- being of the society and environment.
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Sentence: secondly, All corporations does need transportation facilities leading to increase in number of vehicle in the surroundings hence rising air and noise pollution whose ill effects are taken by societies in which they work.corporations not only pollute air but also pollute soil and water in case of many industrial work. they use resourcers of the surroundings for there need.
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