You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart compares four different countries ,China,America,Turkic ,and Brazil,in terms of the average number of hours each day the tourists of each nation spent doing entertainment activities while they were on vacation In Greece in August 2019.
In general,Chinese and Americans showed that they are most interested in reading books.While sightseeing was the least chosen activity during the holiday of Turkish and Brazilian tourists .
According to the bar chart,Chinese people are very keen on reading books by the fact that tourists spent about 8 hours per day immersing themself in books.and only 1 hour each day was used to visit scenic spots.Besides ,the American people also shared the hobby of perusing books with the chinese that they spent up to 5 hours for 1 days on their holiday.
In comparison, it seems that Turkish and Brazilian tourists relatively like spending their time at the beach 5 and 6 hours per day.In addition,it is obvious that sightseeing is also not Turkish people ‘s passion with only 3 hours spent for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16959064327 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03986937894 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625730994152 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0229122919 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 221.0 112.824112599 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.75 22.9334400587 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.23603664747 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382960170745 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219838472205 0.103423049105 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539861561305 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219838472205 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539861561305 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.2329268293 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.