The graph illustrates the steel demand and employment in a given nation over a one-year period. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that both segments fluctuated but followed similar downward trends. By the end of the period, actual demand had overtaken production.
Starting with the first 2 months, all the figures including steel manufacturing, current steel demand and hired workers met their peaks. From there, the amount of steel produced witnessed the downfall below 4000 tonnes and remained stable until July, while 2500 thousand citizens were found jobless due to the steep collapse to 3000 in March. Moreover, the steel need also declined, even though it kept pace with a fluctuating trend between 2000 and 3000 tonnes, before plummeting to 0 in October then recovering back to 2000 at the end of the period. Furthermore, the nation’s data observed the actual demand for steel as a turning point which had exceeded the production, with respective being 2000 tonnes and 1000 tonnes.
This end of the year pattern was largely mirrored by both employment and production, as the former crashed from the second peak of nearly 5000 in July to under 1000 at the end of December with no recovery. Comparably, the nation’s employment had steadily subsided after rising to 3500 in August.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04117647059 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58826871636 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4105082005 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186984512793 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807352478017 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286541604323 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137088099437 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00606043008824 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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